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Edit: changed "mrs" into "mr", thanks to ~Cup-a-Joe ;) /Edit
Edit 2: changed strength into strenght, thanks to ~CynderSpyrolover /edit 2


POLISH:
Act II - Decyzje

Drake: Dzisiaj, jak obiecałem, potrenujemy strzelanie ogniem do celu. Złączcie się w trzyosobowe(właściwie to trzysmokowe... XD) grupy, proszę.
Drake: pamiętajcie że nie chodzi tutaj o szybkość, tylko celność. I...
Drake: ...panie Flame, naprawdę myślałeś, że Cię nie zauważę?
Flame: *ojapierdziu face*
Flame: Uh... przepraszam za spóźnienie, panie Drake... Zaspałem...
Drake: *wzdycha* w porządku. Ze względu na to że to pierwszy raz, zapomnimy o tym...
Drake: *gada* jak już mówiłem... blabla~ nie chce mi się tego tłumaczyć tak szczerze xD
Spyro: *Flame NIGDY by nie zaspał na lekcję Drake'a... coś jest nie tak.

FINALLY 8D
After more than two moths I've done next page XD; I swear I'll be now faster at them :meow: Actually, this one was odne in three days :'D (one day - lineart, one day - colouring &part of shading, third day - shading and simple BGs)
And please don't say a word about first panel XDD It was done TWO MOTHS AGO XD Thigngs changed a bit and I think I can do buildings better now - but it still don't change fact that I was too lazy to make first panel from beggining (+I know myself and this would totally ruin my inspiration ._.)

Act's name is DECISIONS - you'll know why after reading this :)

So, Flame overslept for mrs' Drake's lesson :XD: In comic, or at last in begin, I'd like to show you few lessons and few teachers too :meow: First one you've met was ice dragon - and he was helping dragons to pratise their observation. Second one - Drake - fire dragon, teachingaccuracy and shooting to target. He is also Flame's fav teacher (he is cool and fire dragon 8D) - that's why Spyro didn't believed Flame overslept~ Uh oh :noes: NExt teachers will be showed in next pages... or not XD It depends ~

I wanted to make Spyro's character as he had in DotD - so he is a bit boring... but hey, that's what Flame's for! 8D :XD: No, but really - Spyro won't be the coolest character of this comic, but still he'll have his moments :P

A lesson of shooting to targets... I wonder what will happen on this lesson >w> (except shooted targets XD)

Hope ya like it! ;D


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Spyro, Flame (c) Sierra
Drake, Prince of Darkness (including story) and art (c) *Fire-Flame-Fan
Do NOT use it without permission - except for personal uses. At last give me credit! :noes:
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:iconsmeagle123:
smeagle123 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Student General Artist
FOUND IT! NAILED IT! READING IT! :iconsuperw00tplz:
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
AW MAAAAAN

stop it
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:iconcynder1998:
cynder1998 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2011  Student Digital Artist
kurcze rób to po polsku lepiej a potem na angielski! xD
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
Hah xD;
Jednak wtedy mniej osób będzie to czytać... a chodzi o przekazanie historii co nie? ;d
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cynder1998 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Nom... a;e lepiej by było jakby było po polsku :>(nie wiem o czym piszemy bo to chyba dawno byłoooo ale chyba o język komiksu)
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
Tssaaa, dawno, bo od dwóch miesięcy nie odwiedzałam DeviantArtu x'D
Ale... tak, chodziło o to , że napisałaś (-eś?) żebym robiła komiks po polsku i tłumaczyła na angielski x'D
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cynder1998 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
-aś :D
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:iconfire-flame-fan:
Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011
Okej :D Teraz już zapamiętam. :XD:
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:iconchotara:
Chotara Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
*ojapierdziu face* to mnie rozwaliło. Ta mina jest genialna XD Fajny ten Drake ^^
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:iconfire-flame-fan:
Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011
Dobra nazwa dla tego ryjka xD
Nom też go lubię :lol:
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:iconkrystaldragon96:
krystaldragon96 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011
coś tu się kroi *3*
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Tiger1996 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011   Digital Artist
polskiego proszę XD
pomogłabyś mi z tłumaczeniem mojego komiksu (jak nie chcesz to spoko C:)
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011
ooo właśnie zapomniałam xD
Mogę pomóc 8D
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Tiger1996 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2011   Digital Artist
nawet nie wiesz jak ci dziękuję :la:
jak będziesz się nudzić to możesz się pobawić w tłumacza 21-23 strony
(21 jest zrobiona do jakiegoś momętu bo dalej nie wiedziałam jak )
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2011
Przyjemność po mojej stronie 8D
Jak zdążę to jeszcze dzisiaj spróbuję jedną stronkę! o3o
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masonday Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2011
COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Silverthehedgehog747 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow pretty epic my friend. I love Flames expression in the 7th panel!!!
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:iconsuppari:
suppari Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011  Hobbyist
derp, douple comment -w- i hate my internet..
sorry ;w;
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:iconfire-flame-fan:
Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2011
it's okay :XD:
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suppari Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011  Hobbyist
8TH PANEL I LOVE ITTTT IT'S AMAZING FLAME'S EXPRESSION IS SO ADORABLE X'DDD
AWESOME PAGE, I JUST LOVE EVERYTHING ON THIS C8
And that teacher draggy~ :noes: really neat desing and alll *W*
and i love Drake's expression in 2th and 6th panel X'D They're just so perfect again ôwô KEEP UP THE AWESOME EXPRESSIONSS :dummy:
but why Flame was late from the lesson ;OO MYSTERIESSS That's why i cant wait to see the next pages *W*
VEERY VEERY GOOD WORK MY FRIENDLY FRIEND :iconilikeitplz:
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2011
ooooch thank you so muchhh *w*
Drake's sexy... XDD No, rly, for me he is :noes:;

I hope I'll manage to do next pages quick X'D

Thankiez! :glomp:
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suppari Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011  Hobbyist
Nooo problem ;D
Hahah XD HE IS sexy :eyes: 8'D
i wish i was quick too x'D
WELCOME :la:
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2011
Awwies, mah sexy Draky... xDD'
|D
Oh, btw, how's your comic going? :D
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:iconsuppari:
suppari Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2011  Hobbyist
Haha XD
comic...8B..well....
XDDD i've been kinda lazy at doing it, but well im alredy colouring the next page 8'B
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011
LOOL I laughed at part "comic...8B..well...." XD I could almost imagine how someone is staindg in front of me saying that |D

Oooch :lol:
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suppari Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Hobbyist
Hahahah XDDDD me too.. comic..8B WHAT comic?? xD
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011
XDDD
Ya needed a while to remember you even have problem? :'D
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Kuksi23 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow awsomnaśna stronka i te ich minki mnie rozwalają! O coś z nim jest... To na pewno wszystko wina galaretki owocowej! Do lochu z nią :iconanimefaceplz::XD:
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Nuke-annihilation2 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Student Artist
strength was correct before:meow:
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:iconfire-flame-fan:
Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011
I've searched in translator and both forms are good XDDD; oh boy...~
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Nuke-annihilation2 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011  Student Artist
Ahh, ok. i was always taught that its spelled like strength.:XD:
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011
So did I, but then someone said it's other and then you said it was good before... so I've checked XD
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Nuke-annihilation2 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011  Student Artist
ahh, lol, ok:meow:
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Krovash Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Noticed, that text in some portons blends with the background which "tickles the eyes". For example look at "Mr. Flame, You really thought I won't notice you?" And look at "thought" it's being crossed by the line in the background...
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011
And...?
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Krovash Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, i'd do chat clouds non transparent. Why? Because when you read them nothing has to interrupt you, and when it's transparent, you look at the text, but you don't completely digest what you just read. Plus it's much easier to read when the text contrasts with the chat cloud. If it's transparent, it doesnt happen. Im in no way telling you how you should do your comic, but only hint you on how to make them more comfortable to read.
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2011
...I'll leave it as it is -.-
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Dragonaxxx Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
7 panel XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Ja przepraszam!~ ALE TA MINA XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDd
*dziki brecht* XD
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011
XDDD
A jak TY wygląasz przyłapana? XD
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Dragonaxxx Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ta mina jest ŚWIETNA XD

A no.... na pewno nie mam takiej epickiej |D
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011
Hahah xD
Tylko Flame może taką mieć |D;
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:icondragonaxxx:
Dragonaxxx Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No a jak |D
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aros093 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kombinator XD
Bardzo podobają mi się pozy i te mimiki twarzy :D
Jestem ciekaw,co będzie następne :la:
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DragonEpic94 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011
du dud dun
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8spyroncynder8 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011
Dun dun DUUUUNNNNN!!!!!!
:XD: Great job with the comic! ;P
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Squidub Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011  Student Digital Artist
This is an epic page ;D
I love the expressions here! :XD: And chibi flame mwahh! :P
Awesome job :icongreatjobplz:
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Yorialu Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol I loves your story plot! :iconeepplz:

So much better then mine :iconmhmplz:

And I must say, I thought that mr. Drake was Flame for a second thar :iconhurrplz:
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Fire-Flame-Fan Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011
Thankiez! 8D

No waii, your is better ;_;

Hahah XD Nooo, he is fire dragon like Flame, but he still is not Flame... but damn Drake's so sexy ;w; /shotshotshot
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Yorialu Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Naw I so like your's a lot bettah >w>;

Lol I agree with that :iconhurrhurrplz:
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